I'm quite new, can't figure out how I can better serve people and in turn, can earn a good revenue. https://clarity.fm/ghufranarif
It needs some basic revision to eliminate errors.
For starters, the tag line
"Changing the way how online businesses perform..."
ought to be either "the way" or "how" – not both.
Even so, that's a bit vague. Rather than hire an editor, hire a writer. I'm not cheap, but I'd do it for you if you were in the market to hire a specialist.
Answered 9 years ago
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